Lesbian Fiction Forum Something is broken
Not like the first morning
More like the rip-tide
Took me without warning
Tears without reason
Anger without a goal
Disapointment and
Pain: all out of control
Why were all my dreams
Built upon sifting sands
And gone when I wake
Not at all like I planned
Filed under: Freewriting by PaulaO
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Keywords: Prose
last modified: 04/28/06 20:55
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Keywords: Prose
last modified: 04/28/06 20:55
The tone of this is depressing and dark. You OK? Need an impartial ear? You know my email addr.
— submitted 4/29/2006 @ 6:58 am
I had a bad day.
Better now.
Thank you for caring, dude!
— submitted 4/29/2006 @ 9:00 am